Помогите срочно !!!!!!

aisha910: This is a good essay, but there are a few things you can do
to improve it.
1 In several places I’ve underlined where you’ve used the
wrong word or expression, and you need to replace them
with one of these words:
age, apart, discover, everyone, if, journey, refuse, restrict,
share, solution, what, whether.
2 I’ve shown six verbs where you’ve used the wrong form or
tense.
3 Please divide your essay into four paragraphs!