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Hi my friend. I'm visited turkey. In Turkey I sew sea. My family go swim in sea. But my brother went in computer games. I don't love computer games. I love swimming, play football on beach. We always went to the party. In the party, we dance and listen music. I love Turkey because you can relax in room, swam and play computer games, football. My holiday's good. See you!!
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