Очень прошу проверить грамматику в кратком рассказе о любимом книжном персонаже. Спасибо.
My favourite book characters is the Edmond Dantes. From the book The Count of Monte Cristo.
His appearance:
He was a heavy-built body, he had blond hair and a round face.
Features of character:
He has a very strong and persistent character.
Special about Edmond Dantes:
His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies.
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Ответил Gendalf1234
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He HAS a heavy-built body, he has blond hair and a round face.
Там кроме этой ошибки ничего нету.
Там кроме этой ошибки ничего нету.
катас:
да ладно!!! там куча ошибок помимо того, что ВЫ указали!
пример!
Ответил катас
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My favourite book character is Edmond Dantes.
He is a main character of the book The Count of Monte Cristo.
His appearance:He has a heavy-built body, he has blond hair and a round face.
Features of character:He has a very strong and persistent character.
Edmond Dantes's features:His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies
He is a main character of the book The Count of Monte Cristo.
His appearance:He has a heavy-built body, he has blond hair and a round face.
Features of character:He has a very strong and persistent character.
Edmond Dantes's features:His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies
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