I went to the shops with my friend after school. We bought lollies to eat in the park. We sat and ate the lollies together as we chatted. Another friend of ours was walking by and came over to join us. We talked about our school day and the plans we had coming up over the weekend. It was getting late and I needed to be home for Friday night tacos. I said goodbye to my friends and headed home. Task: Rewrite the passage above to make it more engaging & interesting! Consider using nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs to help you.​